Monday, April 9, 2012

~H~


Today's A to Z Challenge letter is ~H~ and I thought I'd share the pleas of a people tired of living in fear. 

Hidden

Amidst the enemy our king is hidden
Until a man he grows to be
Knowledge of his presence forebidden
His safety determines our people’s destiny.

Our world labor’s under the Dark God’s rule
Our people fear unveiling
As they pray that thier saving jewel
Doesn’t end up merely failing.

Send the savior oh god of light
Please hear your people plead
Send the king to wield your might
Let it be time for him to lead.

18 comments:

Cortney Pearson said...

Nice work! I always appreciate other people who can write poetry.

Johanna Garth said...

Very tolkeinesque! Loved it.

Linda Jackson said...

I agree with Cortney. I appreciate people who can write poetry. Good job. :)

Sabrina A. Fish said...

I am pretty sure you couldn't have given this fantasy writer a bigger compliment. Thank you.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

Thanks so much.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

I appreciate that you enjoy it! Thanks so much, Linda.

Margo Kelly said...

Nicely done! :)

Ashley Nixon said...

I love that these are fantasy. LOL. Or at least, they remind me of fantasy!! Great job! :)

Morgan said...

Like Cortney, I appreciate poetry too... it's a rare talent. And you do SO well, Sabrina ;)

Samantha said...

Man I wish I could write poetry! That was really good :) You can really feel the desperation for this leader to rise!

KSCollier said...

What great talent you have. I cannot write poetry, and you definitely have the talent. I'm just A to Z-ing it.

Laura Marcella said...

This is a beautiful poem, Sabrina. Hope you had a wonderful Easter and happy A to Z!!

Sabrina A. Fish said...

Thanks so much.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

Yes, indeed, you are correct. I am a fantasy writer. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed them.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

Thank you, dear lady. I am happy you have enjoyed them.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

You should give it a go. These A to Z posts are, in fact, the first poems I have ever written. I am glad you feel what I wanted to convey.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

So nice to meet you. I am glad you like them. Thanks for stopping by.

Sabrina A. Fish said...

Thank you so much, Laura. I had a fabulous Easter. He is risen! My A to Z is going well and I am loving meeting all these wonderful bloggy friends.