Monday, April 9, 2012

~H~


Today's A to Z Challenge letter is ~H~ and I thought I'd share the pleas of a people tired of living in fear. 

Hidden

Amidst the enemy our king is hidden
Until a man he grows to be
Knowledge of his presence forebidden
His safety determines our people’s destiny.

Our world labor’s under the Dark God’s rule
Our people fear unveiling
As they pray that thier saving jewel
Doesn’t end up merely failing.

Send the savior oh god of light
Please hear your people plead
Send the king to wield your might
Let it be time for him to lead.

18 comments:

  1. Nice work! I always appreciate other people who can write poetry.

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    1. I am pretty sure you couldn't have given this fantasy writer a bigger compliment. Thank you.

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  3. I agree with Cortney. I appreciate people who can write poetry. Good job. :)

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    1. I appreciate that you enjoy it! Thanks so much, Linda.

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  4. I love that these are fantasy. LOL. Or at least, they remind me of fantasy!! Great job! :)

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    1. Yes, indeed, you are correct. I am a fantasy writer. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed them.

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  5. Like Cortney, I appreciate poetry too... it's a rare talent. And you do SO well, Sabrina ;)

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    1. Thank you, dear lady. I am happy you have enjoyed them.

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  6. Man I wish I could write poetry! That was really good :) You can really feel the desperation for this leader to rise!

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    1. You should give it a go. These A to Z posts are, in fact, the first poems I have ever written. I am glad you feel what I wanted to convey.

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  7. What great talent you have. I cannot write poetry, and you definitely have the talent. I'm just A to Z-ing it.

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    1. So nice to meet you. I am glad you like them. Thanks for stopping by.

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  8. This is a beautiful poem, Sabrina. Hope you had a wonderful Easter and happy A to Z!!

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    1. Thank you so much, Laura. I had a fabulous Easter. He is risen! My A to Z is going well and I am loving meeting all these wonderful bloggy friends.

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