tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post6887298280271434259..comments2023-10-21T09:24:35.617-05:00Comments on Sabrina's Blog: Campaigner Challenge #1Sabrina A. Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-46879457723046085702012-03-02T10:00:59.044-06:002012-03-02T10:00:59.044-06:00Thanks!Thanks!Sabrina A. Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-77138595530195044822012-02-29T15:49:42.459-06:002012-02-29T15:49:42.459-06:00Excellent entry. Very nice suspense. You get a vot...Excellent entry. Very nice suspense. You get a vote from me. = )<br /><br />Melissa Maygrove #149.Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08516493326566981116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-56173876936657025252012-02-28T09:53:55.466-06:002012-02-28T09:53:55.466-06:00Thanks, ladies!Thanks, ladies!Sabrina A. Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-76337567077557895432012-02-26T16:25:23.412-06:002012-02-26T16:25:23.412-06:00Aww, and I was hoping her fear would be misplaced!...Aww, and I was hoping her fear would be misplaced! I'd love to know what happens next :-)Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-26965637473868555102012-02-24T06:01:57.552-06:002012-02-24T06:01:57.552-06:00As I work through this campaign for the first time...As I work through this campaign for the first time, I am amazed how alike some people are. As I scrolled down your list of comments, after reading your piece, I said to myself, "Ooh, I like!..." A very similar comment to Morgan once again!<br />Very nice job Sabrina!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09678216576112327332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-51258609004429806942012-02-23T09:55:34.700-06:002012-02-23T09:55:34.700-06:00Thanks, everyone. Working on getting the whole boo...Thanks, everyone. Working on getting the whole book as good as that scene.Sabrina A. Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-71246449033154766292012-02-23T09:18:58.661-06:002012-02-23T09:18:58.661-06:00Nice writing! You fit a lot in 200 words, I'm...Nice writing! You fit a lot in 200 words, I'm impressed:)Tess Julia https://www.blogger.com/profile/17850176812284692371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-53916701990101242232012-02-22T22:49:02.112-06:002012-02-22T22:49:02.112-06:00Great writing, and I love the name Ruark! Nice wor...Great writing, and I love the name Ruark! Nice work!! :DCortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-76424996797348868852012-02-22T21:10:04.983-06:002012-02-22T21:10:04.983-06:00Wow! I want to know how it ends! Great job!Wow! I want to know how it ends! Great job!Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13451332558262879982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-77752832240613789392012-02-22T12:45:46.962-06:002012-02-22T12:45:46.962-06:00Love the twist.Love the twist.Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-55216376971323225252012-02-22T12:20:20.009-06:002012-02-22T12:20:20.009-06:00Very unique. I too would like to see more of this....Very unique. I too would like to see more of this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-71771424748300815732012-02-22T08:18:18.587-06:002012-02-22T08:18:18.587-06:00Oooooh, intriguing! I want to know the before and...Oooooh, intriguing! I want to know the before and the after to this one!<br /><br />#95digillettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439806613517879373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-80436208069340342622012-02-21T22:07:16.443-06:002012-02-21T22:07:16.443-06:00Trust is always a fickle thing, but it makes for a...Trust is always a fickle thing, but it makes for a great plot element. <br /><br />#109Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12106399041059595196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-22217105576686523562012-02-21T19:37:25.538-06:002012-02-21T19:37:25.538-06:00Uh oh, what did he do? Guess she was right not to...Uh oh, what did he do? Guess she was right not to trust him. Good story.<br /><br />I'm a new follower and entry #96Nancy Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05735642863696266005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-81285221725358398422012-02-21T18:40:00.814-06:002012-02-21T18:40:00.814-06:00You've got me hooked for your WIP! Intense, an...You've got me hooked for your WIP! Intense, and I want to know more about "the dark one". I'll vote for you!Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-59680851483271058922012-02-21T18:30:32.308-06:002012-02-21T18:30:32.308-06:00Nice job! I wonder why he betrayed her...Nice job! I wonder why he betrayed her...alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-3727337403439966842012-02-21T16:08:18.003-06:002012-02-21T16:08:18.003-06:00Hello fellow fishy!
Excellent story! Such suspens...Hello fellow fishy!<br /><br />Excellent story! Such suspense. I want to know more about the place they are in! Great work building the mood and the setting!Claire L. Fishbackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01769874003046497946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-4454496190508328532012-02-21T15:30:12.099-06:002012-02-21T15:30:12.099-06:00Liked the ending!
#83Liked the ending!<br />#83Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-11919435366579327542012-02-21T11:54:50.343-06:002012-02-21T11:54:50.343-06:00I guess she couldn't trust him. Mine is # 71I guess she couldn't trust him. Mine is # 71Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-53537443322243741162012-02-21T11:38:50.162-06:002012-02-21T11:38:50.162-06:00I love how you described the shadows as inky filam...I love how you described the shadows as inky filaments of death. And wow, did you pull us into the story with her senses and emotions. Well done.Avery Marshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15615057600393412922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-25128755101786728852012-02-21T08:20:06.782-06:002012-02-21T08:20:06.782-06:00Thanks for all the fabulous comments. Soon I hope ...Thanks for all the fabulous comments. Soon I hope you all can read about Ruark and Lara. I am winding down revisions and hope to submit soon.Sabrina A. Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14854713472424756485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-48885777235826438172012-02-21T00:47:32.954-06:002012-02-21T00:47:32.954-06:00That's a lot of great storytelling in such few...That's a lot of great storytelling in such few words - well done - I'm intrigued and want more :)Ann Coryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17361885310781741289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-68691236026407203052012-02-20T21:26:35.115-06:002012-02-20T21:26:35.115-06:00Oooo! I like it!!! Nice job! Now I want to know if...Oooo! I like it!!! Nice job! Now I want to know if Ruark will get the forgiveness he seeks...Sherri Lackeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12574448009541412249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-31070096893993194382012-02-20T20:19:23.243-06:002012-02-20T20:19:23.243-06:00I'd really like to have the context of this st...I'd really like to have the context of this story! Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00503400522084515874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7616783084412534340.post-68345852762555897262012-02-20T17:57:22.374-06:002012-02-20T17:57:22.374-06:00Intense! Loved it :) Great story. Following you no...Intense! Loved it :) Great story. Following you now.Jessica Therrienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08075397024734371669noreply@blogger.com