Thursday, April 19, 2012

~Q~

Look at this! I just happen to have an interesting creature in my WIP that begins with Q. She is a bit on the creepy side, but hey, it's my fantasy novel and I like them creepy! 

Meet the Quingore, Lilra. She is the first of her kind, made by dark forces using my MC, Ruark's dead mother's corpse, a living slave woman, and a secret ingredient you'll have to wait to read my book to discover. Here she is taunting a shocked Ruark after making her very first appearance. 

Do you like this face, little king, 
That my master gave me?
Your mother was very beautiful.
Does seeing her face on me make you angry?

Come, inspect me for inconsistencies,
I seek to gain your approval.
Before I use these luscious lips
To aid in your removal.

4 comments:

  1. Love it, Sabrina. I can picture the scene. :)

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  2. "aid in your removal"? Man, she sounds mean!

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  3. I admire fantasy writers because of their world-building skills. It seems so much harder than writing contemporary mysteries.

    Cruising through on my A to Z tour -- it's nice to meet you.

    Patricia

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  4. She sounds pretty scary. I can only imagine Ruark's horror.

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