~H~
Today's A to Z Challenge letter is ~H~ and I thought I'd share the pleas of a people tired of living in fear.
Hidden
Amidst the enemy our king is hidden
Until a man he grows to be
Knowledge of his presence forebidden
His safety determines our people’s destiny.
Our world labor’s under the Dark God’s rule
Our people fear unveiling
As they pray that thier saving jewel
Doesn’t end up merely failing.
Send the savior oh god of light
Please hear your people plead
Send the king to wield your might
Let it be time for him to lead.
Nice work! I always appreciate other people who can write poetry.
ReplyDeleteVery tolkeinesque! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteI am pretty sure you couldn't have given this fantasy writer a bigger compliment. Thank you.
DeleteI agree with Cortney. I appreciate people who can write poetry. Good job. :)
ReplyDeleteI appreciate that you enjoy it! Thanks so much, Linda.
DeleteNicely done! :)
ReplyDeleteI love that these are fantasy. LOL. Or at least, they remind me of fantasy!! Great job! :)
ReplyDeleteYes, indeed, you are correct. I am a fantasy writer. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed them.
DeleteLike Cortney, I appreciate poetry too... it's a rare talent. And you do SO well, Sabrina ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear lady. I am happy you have enjoyed them.
DeleteMan I wish I could write poetry! That was really good :) You can really feel the desperation for this leader to rise!
ReplyDeleteYou should give it a go. These A to Z posts are, in fact, the first poems I have ever written. I am glad you feel what I wanted to convey.
DeleteWhat great talent you have. I cannot write poetry, and you definitely have the talent. I'm just A to Z-ing it.
ReplyDeleteSo nice to meet you. I am glad you like them. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteThis is a beautiful poem, Sabrina. Hope you had a wonderful Easter and happy A to Z!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Laura. I had a fabulous Easter. He is risen! My A to Z is going well and I am loving meeting all these wonderful bloggy friends.
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