~C~ is for Camille
~C~ is for Camille from Lost Haven by Sabrina A. Fish
In the near future, a few young women manifest extraordinary abilities called "Shine." Each girl's ability is different. Some develop extraordinary mental abilities. Some become physically strong. Others have powers that defy description. But the world does not embrace these Shines. It fears them.
Camille’s life hasn't been the same since her parents' traumatic murder-suicide. In the aftermath, an intruder breaks into her home. Camille discovers a mysterious thumb drive hidden in her father’s office and realizes the unwanted changes in her life are just beginning. Caught in a spider's web of politics and conspiracy, betrayal and abduction, Camille is about to discover that the world is changing and hiding is not an option. Not even for Shines.
~Excerpt~
Camille gasped in jagged breaths as she pushed
through the crowd of laughing people. An angry male voice yelled her name. She moved
faster. Loud music, bright flashing lights, and the smell of sweat and garbage
swirled around her. Carnies called for her to try her luck to win one of the giant
stuffed prizes hanging above their game stalls, but she ignored them to search
for the corridor of food carts. She rounded the corner, encountering smells of
sweet fried funnel cakes, sizzling turkey legs, and grilled sweet corn on the
cob. Her stomach churned, the smells failing to entice like they normally would.
She was supposed to meet her best friend,
Jenni, at the sarsaparilla stand. Each September, they enjoyed coming to
Oklahoma’s State Fair. The first thing they always did was buy the little mini
milk jug of iced root beer. Knowing the stand was usually located at the center
of the main corridor of food vendors, Camille searched for the correct way to
run. Unsure, but knowing she needed to keep moving, she lunged to the right
only to have two large hairy arms wrap around her from behind.
Her ex-boyfriend, Gary, spun her around and
brought his mouth down on hers before she could call out for help. Holding her
against his heavily muscled chest, Gary pulled her into the shadows as a group
of teenage males whistled and called for them to get a room. His large hand
held her head still while his other arm pinned her arms to her sides. She
kicked at his shins, but he forced his tongue into her mouth. Realizing she
would tire long before he would, she went limp.
He groaned in triumph. Ignoring the bile
threatening to come up, she bit down on his tongue as hard as she could while
bringing her knee up into his crotch. He jerked his head back, releasing her as
he cried out and crumpled to the ground.
She glared at him. “It’s over, Gary. Touch me
again, and I’ll file a VPO against your ass.”
She backed out of the shadows into the crowded,
brightly lit avenue between the food carts. He straightened to his full
six-feet-one-inch height and smiled at her. The cold possessiveness in his pale
blue eyes raked over her body. She shivered. Had she ever found that
possessiveness attractive?
They’d dated for a year until her parents’ deaths
four months ago. With her parent’s no longer in the picture, he’d stopped
pretending to be the kind, considerate man she’d been attracted to. He’d begun
to use her grief against her, undermining her confidence in herself until she’d
believed she was nothing without him. Then he’d put his hands on her. She’d
actually believed him when he’d said it was her fault. If Jenni hadn’t stepped
in, she’d have married and given him total control of her life. She shuddered.
She’d been so naïve.
Gary followed her into the lighted
corridor. “No one will believe you. You belong to me, Camille. There’s no where
you can go. If you try to run, I’ll find you.”
She squeezed her shaking hands into fists. Her
breath rushed in and out of her lungs as the truth of his words threatened to
choke her. Pressure tightened in her chest. She stepped back as he moved
closer. People gave them wary glances, sensing the thick tension between them.
“No.
I belong only to myself. We’re done. Leave me alone.”
“Why do you fight the inevitable? You know I’ll
care for you better than you ever could. You’ll have everything you could ever
want.” He held his hand out to her. “Come, Camille. Stop being ridiculous. Let
me take you home, where you belong.”
~End Excerpt~
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Ooh...nice teaser.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteGary sounds slap-worthy. Jerk! (Good teaser though.)
ReplyDeleteTotally irredeemable! Glad you liked it!
DeleteNice teaser. Thanks for stopping by my blog earlier :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks! You're welcome!
DeleteLove the excerpt and your theme! Thanks for stopping by my blog too! ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks! Ditto!
DeleteYeah, Camille's intriguing, as is the Shine premise. If Shine abilities are all so different, what makes them similar and gives them their name?
ReplyDeleteThey are all caused by a virus that affected their brains.
DeleteWow! so cool! I love your writing! thanks so much for the fascinating character! "Shine on" :) jean
ReplyDeleteRock and Razor! Thanks, Jean.
DeleteIntriguing start!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis seems like it is a very cool story.
ReplyDeleteShawn from Laughing at Life 2
Thank you!
DeleteDagnabbit. You comment on my blog brought me here, only to find a teaser story and now I have to go get my hands on the rest or my brain might possibly explode and alkahtklewjnsdalckjn. You're so mean. (And I mean that in the most complimentary way possible.)
ReplyDeleteI truly hope you enjoy it! And I'll definitely take that as a compliment!
DeleteI love the concept of Shines.
ReplyDeleteIt's a fun world to write in!
DeleteThat excerpt was a great tease. I also very much like the concept of shines. Great start!
ReplyDeleteWell written. I could feel the tension building with your words. ;)
ReplyDeleteAwesome! I just got it, and told my mother about it, and she got it too! :)
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Thanks! Let me know what you think!
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